Saturday, October 2, 2010

The Best Tin Foil Boats



In preview, unfortunately only for the few ... erm, friends of LJ (?), my first fanfiction on Umineko.
And who could never be my main victim or protagonist of this story? Beatrice, of course.

Warning, spoilers EP5!
If you followed only the anime, then you should not read on. However, if you want the same to read what it says and leave a comment in spite of everything, I'll be very pleased. ^ _ ^
And then, in a sense, you can consider this as a springboard for publication elsewhere ...
Ok, let's move on.



Title: The broken wing
Genre: Angst, Introspective
Warnings: Spoilers ! EP5 "End of the Golden Witch"
Characters: Beatrice (more references to Ushiromiya Battler)
Rating: Yellow
Chapters: 1 / 1
In progress: No.

A / N: The first part is in italics the description of the scenario in which the story takes place, the same hurricane dell'Ep5 Tea Party.
The lengths of sentences that are in italics in the fic I have not made up myself (except the last sentence that ends the story.) These are the words he utters Beatrice herself at that point still in the URI dell'EP5 Tea Party.
The rest of the fic, however, I wrote it.

Warning: Spoilers!
This story is everything, in my opinion and it may have understood that part-reading might have felt blessed at the instant they enter the cathedral and see Battler skewered by the sword of Dlanor A. Knox.
And, I know ... I decided to write this fic just because I was inspired by this scene, which is, in my opinion, one of the most beautiful parts of Umineko no Naku koro ni , if not the most beautiful.

Oh, I almost forgot. For the most avid fans of Umineko: Forgive me if this elaborate logic is meaningless and very imaginative to the official story. I tried to do my best, trying not to get out from the explanations offered, but I think I just wrote a bunch of nonsense and thoughts imbued with a healthy dose of OOC. I hope I am wrong about this, otherwise, never mind. I will trust in the limit your clemency, if possible, because this is my first fic on Umineko ...
Enjoy! ^ _ ^





was now fallen silent in the cathedral. The fifth game was over for quite a while. Had already been decreed a winner and a loser, and nothing and no one could question the history that until then had been written.
Everyone seemed to have vanished from that place. They could not hear any more of the witches or the malicious sneers, nor Dlanor referential monologue about the events taking place in the fifth episode. In
that cathedral so empty and lonely, he was only the lifeless body of a boy who had fought to the end with all his might to ward off a truth to this vile and unacceptable.

Suddenly, as if to break the silence, he heard light footsteps, almost imperceptible to the human ear.
At that moment you could see a silhouette of a person onto one of the pillars that surrounded the central nave of the church.
Then, from the darkness of the corner, someone emerged.
A woman, who, without any emotion to shine from his face, was slowly driving down the aisle and then come before the altar.
Giunta
with it, the young cast his eyes towards the corpse of the young, pierced and suspended by a heavy sword. At this sight, she sighed and looked down.




I looked in your direction.
was just me and you in the great cathedral. You on the altar, and I was away from the main entrance.

I went to your body and touched with the fingers. Gently stroking the contours, I sighed again.
I could not understand what was going on in the cathedral but, above all, what had happened to you. You were on the altar, and wounded with a sword stuck in your chest, and eyes closed. At first glance, seemed to be asleep.
then I tried to slowly grasp the sleeve of your jacket.
None. No reaction.
"So it's all true ..." I was thinking.
At that time you were not sleeping at all. You were dead.

I said. Hopeless, dropped his head lower, closer to your body. Then I sighed quietly.

"You liar ... ..."

I touched it again. My mind refused to believe the evidence. Thus, I rested my head on your body now cold and motionless and pressed my forehead against your chest.
But I felt no pulse.
was only then that I realized fully the sad reality that it appeared before my eyes. It was not one of your strategic move, your a joke designed to get even all the times that I had cheated.
You were not there anymore.
I resigned myself to that ominous thought, dropping them gently on you.
now I had lost my reason for living.

At that moment, a thought suddenly sprang into my mind.

"Idiot."

course. Who knows how many times I uttered that word ...
That word reminds me a lot of memories of the past. Nostalgic memories for some pleasant aspects, but still painful.
Remember when you were there. And that promise now broken.
had sworn to kill me, but ... in the end it was you to be killed, thus failing to fulfill the promise ...
Why did not you rebelled against your destiny? Why did not you fight back as he tried to do your usual?
I heard you when you said you give up. You probably did not know, but I had seen everything from the beginning.

"You you are ... just an idiot. "

I wonder what the state will not change your mind about your decision. Or maybe it was fate.
Perhaps all had to end this way.
But then ... also came to me the time to bow out?
In the end ... I do not have anything to lose. I'm the reason why I lived, so do not think there is no need for me.
's time to disappear, to escape from this world, to sever the chains that held me bound.
This was not the end that I dreamed to have, but one thing is certain: I'm finally free.
Freedom to fly off the island. Free from all worries and uncertainties that first enveloped me. Free everything.


But before I leave and go away, I felt the need to say one last thing. We hugged and I squeezed.

"Thanks ..."

Thank you for being a worthy opponent.
Thank you for spending most of your time with me.
Thank you for being always by my side, even as a rival and not as a loved one.
I never felt alone when you were sitting in front of me and set your stupid theories on the murders.
For a moment, I understood what it meant be really happy.
You were everything to me. My happiness and my world.

... liar ... "

But instead you will not know any of this.
Because of your great mistake, you will no longer allowed to listen to my voice. If only you had kept that promise ... at this time you and I we will be together again ... For all eternity.

... goodbye ... "

From this moment on you and me we meet again. Our ways part here.
I will never return to this place. Goodbye.

... e. .. "

However, from the bottom of my heart, I have always loved.
For this, there is one thing that I regret and I've never said.

... I'm sorry. "

Forgive me for all the evil you have done.
Forgive me for all the words I said.
And excuse me if I could not tell you before. I've always been a proud person, stubborn and sure of myself. I was convinced that there would be a different ending to this story. The our history.
is why I have acted differently. I had to hate me from you, for you to get to the truth. But you were too naive to understand it.
That ended that. I'm sorry ... Ultimately, it is also my fault. In fact, our defeat are both guilty.
You were too stupid, and I was so unfathomable.
You were supposed to arrive at the truth! And I must be one who would guide you in this difficult journey!
But ... I was not able to play this role.
For this reason, I am forced to disappear. You'll be here, building on this altar, and I will be next only in the form of ash. In the end there will nothing about me, because now my task is finished, but you, maybe ... one day return to live, and then-you-I am sure you'll remember everything.
But then I'm gone.
I will try wherever you go, but I do not find it anymore, because at that point I will be already gone. It is then that you realize the great weight of your sin you have committed against me, and you begin to feel an immense pain in front of my death.



But what I'm saying? Is this not my biggest wish?
Hahaha ... I'm definitely delusional. You're never coming more alive.
Why believe it?
Because for a moment I hoped that we could realize this dream?
No, it is now certain. Will never come true. And this time not even a miracle could happen.
It 's impossible ... It 'absolutely impossible.


now I was alone.
no longer makes sense to live if you're not there anymore.
My heart has finally stopped beating.


So ... Goodbye.
Goodbye forever, Ushiromiya Battler.

0 comments:

Post a Comment